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Browse Arthur's reference chain, the Timeclock, the Timecard states, 30 storyboard shots, muzak escalations, and 11 production documents.
High Concept
Groundhog Day meets a vintage PSA, scored by the relentless ticking of an analog clock. Arthur, a painfully average company man, tries to punch his timecard at the heavy mechanical Timeclock every morning. The machine destroys the card with cheerful escalating violence — confetti, flames, smoke, dust. The loop accelerates. The Narrator's voice starts to skip. Arthur's smile slowly, methodically cracks. The clock ticks on. The card returns stamped: DENIED.
Visual Style
"1950s Corporate Training Film — B&W, 4:3 Pillarboxed, Film Grain, Jaunty-to-Frantic Muzak"
Team Composition
- Idea Person: Pi-Idea
- Technical Lead: Pi-Techlead
- Editor: Pi-Editor
Character Casting
Arthur
The sole human character. 35, thin, rigid posture, heavily pomaded hair. Stiff grey 1950s suit. A permanent deadpan corporate smile that slowly cracks into existential dread. He never speaks about the problem. He just keeps trying.
Narrative Flow (Beat Sheet)
Act I: The Punctual Employee
Title card: "TIME THEFT: Are You Stealing from the Company?" The Narrator explains punctuality. Meet Arthur — stiff smile, pomaded hair, timecard held in both hands. He marches to the Timeclock. Inserts the card. CHUNK. Confetti.
Act II: The Loop Begins
The scene resets. Arthur approaches again. Narrator slightly faster. Card inserted. The machine produces a small, polite puff of flames. Arthur pats it out. Reset. Card ejected at his face. Reset. Card becomes smoke. The ticking grows louder.
Act III: The Acceleration
The editing locks onto the clock. Arthur approaches — the rhythm becomes mechanical. His hair singes. His suit smudges. The Narrator's voice stutters: "Company time... company time... time..." The timecard turns to dust before he reaches the slot.
Act IV: The Verdict
A final, desperate attempt: Arthur wrestles the Timeclock. The machine hums, vibrates, considers. It prints one word on the card: DENIED. The clock reads 9:01. The jaunty muzak returns. The Narrator: "Have a productive day!" Arthur stares into the camera.